An Experiment

Dear Reader,

What does the story say to you when you are blind to all else but the words?


The Jade Writer Girl.


‘Can I help you? … Hi, can I help you?’

‘Oh, uh, sorry. Um, no banana bread, er … chips! Can I have chips please?’

Sigh. ‘Kitchen closes at two.’

‘At two? Damn, that’s right. Uh, sorry, a, um, a chocolate please, that one and uh,’

Crinkle, rustle, Bleep. ‘Anything else?’

‘Uh, yeah, do you do milkshakes?’

‘… no.’

‘Oh … uh … Shit.’


‘I said juice, I’ll have a juice please.’

‘What kind?’

‘Oh, apple please?’

‘That’s $7.90.’

‘Right, thank you. On card please.’ snick, bleep, crank! Slap.

‘Next please.’

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