An Experiment
Dear Reader,
What does the story say to you when you are blind to all else but the words?
Sincerely,
The Jade Writer Girl.
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‘Can I help you? … Hi, can I help you?’
‘Oh, uh, sorry. Um, no banana bread, er … chips! Can I have chips please?’
Sigh. ‘Kitchen closes at two.’
‘At two? Damn, that’s right. Uh, sorry, a, um, a chocolate please, that one and uh,’
Crinkle, rustle, Bleep. ‘Anything else?’
‘Uh, yeah, do you do milkshakes?’
‘… no.’
‘Oh … uh … Shit.’
‘Sorry?’
‘I said juice, I’ll have a juice please.’
‘What kind?’
‘Oh, apple please?’
‘That’s $7.90.’
‘Right, thank you. On card please.’ snick, bleep, crank! Slap.
‘Next please.’
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